[fanfic] Nothingness
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chuunin_archiveTitle: Nothingness
Pairing: Pein x Konan
Rating: T
Genre: Drama/Romance/Angst, take your pick
Summary: She wanted to say something, everything she had wanted to say to him, but she could never say it, could never say any of it. She would settle for what they had now, if just for the moment before she disappeared into nothingness.
Warnings: Character death
( Pools of blood-red eyes looked at her ocean-blue ones, something lingering within them—a promise, she hoped, but it could never be a promise. Never would there be a promise. )
Please review?
Pairing: Pein x Konan
Rating: T
Genre: Drama/Romance/Angst, take your pick
Summary: She wanted to say something, everything she had wanted to say to him, but she could never say it, could never say any of it. She would settle for what they had now, if just for the moment before she disappeared into nothingness.
Warnings: Character death
( Pools of blood-red eyes looked at her ocean-blue ones, something lingering within them—a promise, she hoped, but it could never be a promise. Never would there be a promise. )
Please review?
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Date: 2008-11-21 02:54 pm (UTC)It's an interesting story, though I'm not entirely certain of what happened in it. Do I take it that Konan is dying from a wound she took in battle, and Pein uses this as an opportunity to have some kind of final moments with her?
Small nitpick, but I believe Pein's eyes are silvery-grey, not red. Konan's are a sort of tawny colour.
I'm always happy to see more Pein/Konan, so thanks for sharing.