Advice? (A sketchy mess)

[doggiedynasty.livejournal.com]

Hi guys,

Long time member Doggie (even though I don't post lead entries much) with a question on art advice.

OK:



Not sure on how old it is. It's a random HB sketch on my pad. It's probably my first or second time drawing Sasuke, so maybe I shouldn't be so hard on myself.

Still, when I did it, I was like "No, I'm not there yet", and when I see both Pierrot designs and Kishimoto designs, I felt like something was really really off.

So, can anyone give me some advice on how to improve on Sasuke? Or tell me if this is OK?

Comments

[hokuton_punch]

I don't know that I can help - he looks very recognizably Sasuke to me! XD

[doggiedynasty.livejournal.com]

He is very recognizable. The hair is there, and so is the attitude.