Naruto drabble

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Hey all, here to pimp a bit of writing again XD;



Title: "It was His"
Author: me (pitupaso on FF)
Summary: Naruto can be incredibly sticky regarding certain issues. Oneshot, drabble.
FF Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2643890/1/

Reviews and critism would be appreciated, since I'm not particulary good with writing ^^u Thank you!

Comments

[hidden-gems.livejournal.com]

At first I thought this was going to be about Sasuke, but I was soon corrected.

I really enjoyed it. You might say that you're not particularly good at writing but I saw nothing wrong with it. The characters weren't OOC, your style flows very nicely and I'm actually sure Naruto was indeed very protective of that hitai-ate. So, basically, I think you did a very good job! **grins**

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Thank you! ^^

[jiah.livejournal.com]

Aww, I must say that was absolutely adorable. This is one of the few fics I've read where Naruto has the right ammounts of angst, annoying, and uber-cuteness. You made me "aww" three times X3

[-gejimayu-.livejournal.com]

Heh, thank you! ^^ I'm glad you liked it. =D

[-gejimayu-.livejournal.com]

Thank you ^^u

I don't have an art account, not anymore. But you can check my website. I'll send it to you in a email or something. ^^