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chuunin_archiveI'm sorry for this. I'm really really sorry. Please forgive me. Its a one shot fanfiction. Its terrible. It was supposed to be funny. It was supposed to be longer. It was supposed to be better. Alas it has come out nothing like that. I find it slightly amusing in a way that is terrible. I have NEVER written Naruto fanfiction before. I hope to improve over time.
I'd like critism, constructive please. And if you think its...good...I'd like to know that too. Its not very long and i plan on drawing some art to go with it.
Its a reference to Hinata/Naruto, Sakura/Naruto & Sakura/Sasuke. Its quite bad. Its quite short & Quite amusing...I should hope. Dont expect a masterpiece with the fanfic, expect one with the art =P.
Dear Diary.
I’m finally coming to terms with the fact that Sasuke isn’t coming back. And if he does…What will I do? What will I say to him? To make him see that I still love him. I’ve noticed that Naruto has stopped displaying interest in me too. Just when I was warming up to him he goes cold turkey on me.
Are all men like that? I wish I could tell him how I feel too, without it seeming that all I want is a Sasuke Replacement. Maybe that’s all I do want. For the little squirt to replace Sasuke. Well, he isn’t little anymore. So I suppose…Oh, hang on, someone is at the door.
Okay, that was Naruto. He said something about Hinata, something along the lines of “Hinata…sama…Daisuki” I closed the door in his face.
I'd like critism, constructive please. And if you think its...good...I'd like to know that too. Its not very long and i plan on drawing some art to go with it.
Its a reference to Hinata/Naruto, Sakura/Naruto & Sakura/Sasuke. Its quite bad. Its quite short & Quite amusing...I should hope. Dont expect a masterpiece with the fanfic, expect one with the art =P.
Dear Diary.
I’m finally coming to terms with the fact that Sasuke isn’t coming back. And if he does…What will I do? What will I say to him? To make him see that I still love him. I’ve noticed that Naruto has stopped displaying interest in me too. Just when I was warming up to him he goes cold turkey on me.
Are all men like that? I wish I could tell him how I feel too, without it seeming that all I want is a Sasuke Replacement. Maybe that’s all I do want. For the little squirt to replace Sasuke. Well, he isn’t little anymore. So I suppose…Oh, hang on, someone is at the door.
Okay, that was Naruto. He said something about Hinata, something along the lines of “Hinata…sama…Daisuki” I closed the door in his face.
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Date: 2006-03-16 03:51 pm (UTC)I mean... whoa.
It's rather cute... but too short! You shoulda made more diary entries! You have a nice I-don't-careish type of writing that you should pursue!
And yeah, post it up FF.net or something.
On a side-note, "Hinata...sama...Daisuki" sounds like something out of an S&M session. But that's just my perverted little mind on Jiraiya mode.