[fanfiction] habit

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long, long time, no post :D brought you guys a badly-written drabble. haha. hope you guys enjoy.:D
warnings: slight hint of narusasu. you have to squint your eyes (really hard) through cigarette smoke. and unbeta-ed. (blah)

disclaimer: we all know the newest pairing right?! yaya, sasukenaruto belongs to kishimoto.

written to celebrate my quit-smoking-day anniversary :) (excuse for a major writer's block hehe). on with the drabble:

HABIT

He has a habit of picking up someone else’s habit.

He realizes it as he continues to take a drag on his cigarette.

It doesn’t taste good. He’s sure of it, but something in the smoke stinging his eyes, and burning his lips, makes it insatiable. He carefully places it in between his lips, and with what came from his insides, he takes a long drag.

It makes him forget.

It makes him forget that the one person he wants to be with, is not on his side. Not on his side, supposedly accompanying him in this new-found habit. And most probably sharing with him this pitiful-looking white stick, slowly burning away its life.

He blows the smoke up into the air, and smiles. He sees something. He sees it everyday, and somehow it also makes him sad. The cigarette does make him forget, but only for a moment, cos when the smoke escapes his lips, it reminds him then.

It reminds him then of the face of the person he wishes to see the most.

He silently curses Shikamaru for rubbing on on him this stupid smoking. Shikamaru had already quit, leaving him alone in this crazy bull—cancer sticks.

He then blows again the white figure out into his mouth. And he sees something again. This time, he whooshes it away.

Cos it’s hurting him.

He can see Sasuke’s face.

Comments

[momopi.livejournal.com]

I wanna congratulate you for quitting smoking~!

[momopi.livejournal.com]

Oh and the drabble is beautiful <3

[0-dolphin-0.livejournal.com]

thanks :)

[istne-pieklo.livejournal.com]

Beautifully written drabble! And such painfully vivid imagery! <3

[0-dolphin-0.livejournal.com]

thank you :)

[helike]

Good job here ^^ Well written :)

[0-dolphin-0.livejournal.com]

thanks thanks :)