#50, Ramen
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chuunin_archiveTitle: theme #50, Ramen
Author: paws_bells
Characters/pairings: Uchiha Itachi and Haruno Sakura
Genre: Romance/General
Word Count: 6803
Disclaimer: Naruto does not belong to me.
Rating: T(Contains content not suitable for children)
Summary: Non-massacre AU. Their unlikely love story started inside a Ramen Bar, of all places. She had yelled her confession to him for the world to hear, but he had walked away. Of course, he hadn't known then how determined she could be.
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Date: 2008-09-23 08:24 pm (UTC)I liked the interaction between the two characters. I really enjoyed how you allowed Sakura to be a bit more grown-up. You have made her more palatable to me personally than her pre-shippuden incarnation.
I really liked the gradual progression between the two of them. The pacing lent nicely to the overall story, and there was just the right twist of angst.
I think, perhaps this is the first het story I have ever saved to my memories. Wowie!
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Date: 2008-09-24 05:47 am (UTC)I'm really happy that you enjoyed Ramen! Sakura's pre-shippuden behavior was a disgrace, but then, it showed that she had changed the most out of the Rookie Nine. I like that about her, secret hentai and all, haha!