Liquid Soap

[cherry-blossom4.livejournal.com]

Ok, so I haven't posted here in so long that no one probably even remembers me :/ Anyways, I bring fic(s), in the form of a drabble collection!

Title: Liquid Soap
Author: missmelon12 (which is my penname at ff.net btw)
Rating: G through T
Summary: A collection of drabbles written for the lj community naruto100 .
Other: The community (naruto100 ) has been dead for years and I only recently got around to compiling all of the drabbles I wrote back then and posting them on ff.net. Some of them maybe have been posted several years ago on this community by themselves, but seeing as I have compiled them with several others, I felt the need to go ahead and post the compilation here.
Also: I am accepting prompts/challenges for future drabbles in the naruto100 challenge form. (Including a prompt/challenge, followed by several 'bonuses' of things I should try my best to include in there. It adds to the challenge of the drabble.)

Liquid Soap

On another note, I am currently looking for a good beta for an entirely different story that I have just started working on. So if anyone is interested, please let me know.

On one last note, for anyone who might actually remember me, I have changed my ff.net name from 'xcherryblossom12x' to 'missmelon12'.

Comments

[aurrai.livejournal.com]

It said you don't accept anonymous comments on FF.net so I'll leave my reviews here.

Drabble #2

I like how this one started out with Jiraiya being logical, thinking the logical things he should tell Naruto. I like how it ended with Jiraiya admitting to himself what he really wants Naruto to do and that the mistake Jiraiya made wasn’t that he tried for so long to bring Orochimaru back, but that he gave up before he could. That kind of abrupt contrast at the end—you’re good at leaving something for the reader to hold onto in the end.

Drabble #3

It started off sad and calm and then it unravelled and I felt like I sunk while Kakashi did. All I’ve heard of Rin is that she killed herself but this is a refreshing way of looking at it. Good creativity.


You should think about writing longer stories. I think you'd be good at it.

[cherry-blossom4.livejournal.com]

Ahh really? I have no idea I didn't accept anonymous reviews. I should probably go fix that now. Thanks for telling me.

I'm so glad you saw where I was trying to go with that one :) I've always been a bit iffy with how it might come across to people xD.

And yeah, Drabble 3 was sort of my speculations on what could have happened to her. I mean, as far was we know, she's dead but I've never heard it spoken of that he visits the memorial stone for anyone other than Obito (and Yondaime maybe). Although it is entirely possible that she died outside of battle. I've actually never really heard of her having killed herself. But then again, I've heard virtually nothing about her.

And thank you so much :) I used to write longer stories but they were ridiculously terrible compared to my shorter stuff. So I deleted them since I never planned on finishing them anyway (that and I was ashamed of them >.>) I actually have a long on in the works now, although it is mostly a rewrite of one of the few longer stories I tried to write once that actually had a really good plot.

[aurrai.livejournal.com]

I don't know much about Rin either. It's just what I've heard from other people but they always say it hasn't been confirmed. Mr. Kishimoto's got something up his sleeve, I'm sure.

Longer stories, hurgh, been there, angst'ed that. I still want to get good at it so I have to keep writing them. No improvement without practice.

[cherry-blossom4.livejournal.com]

Doesn't he always?

And yeah... I have no idea how people get it done. I have the ideas for longer stories but never enough drive. :( But I suppose practice does make perfect, and I guess I have been getting better.