A Dangerous Mission

[jennifergale.livejournal.com]

Okay. You have NO IDEA how nervous I am, but I posted Part One of the story I've been working on all month. I'll post part two tomorrow.

Fandom: Naruto
Pairing: Choji/Ino
Story: A Dangerous Mission
Summary: Ino never knew that eating barbecue with Choji would be so dangerous. This story features dares gone wrong, meddling mothers, an ambush, a rescue, and an ending that might rot your teeth.

Story features some Shikamaru/Temari because I couldn't resist.

:hyperventilates:

Seriously. SO nervous.

Comments

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OH MAN. WHAT HAPPENED?

Excellent writing! That's such a complex expression of Chouji and Ino's relationship. It's great. Just awkward enough to be believable. How do old friends act around one another when their feelings change? A question for all times. :)

[jennifergale.livejournal.com]

Oooh, thank you! It's a complex question that I've lived through (with both fantastic and HORRIBLE results!), so it's one that interests me quite a bit.

Part two should be up tomorrow morning, assuming I get time to run a comb through the text one last time tonight.

[tucuxi.livejournal.com]

Cliffhanger like whoah! I really want to know what happens next!

[jennifergale.livejournal.com]

Mission accomplished. ;) I'm finishing it up now and will post it tomorrow.

It's funny, but when I decided to split it (the sucker is ridiculously long and required a split), I didn't really think I'd be leaving y'all with a cliffie. lol So rude!