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As a sucker for character back story, I really liked this chapter.  It brought to light (somewhat, anyway) how Akatsuki recruits people.  It also, naturally, brought more questions, like how long has Deidara been in Akatsuki or, better yet, how long Itachi has been in the organization.  I'm wondering if he was in it before the massacre of his clan, but that's a theory for another time.

Anyway, I liked how this chapter was set up with the battle and the back story intertwining; it didn't seem so out of place as, say, Orochimaru's "white snake skin" thing at the end of chapter 344 (?).  It also made me laugh because of Deidara's seemingly naivete (I mean, what ninja goes around explaining their techniques to possible foes aside from maybe Naruto?  It didn't seem like he had been expecting Akatsuki to show up and recruit him...), but that made me appreciate his character all the more.  It also made me wonder how old he's supposed to be presently and at that time.

As an artist, I also really liked how he thought of Itachi (or at least the sharigan) as true art XD.

But, clearly his pride is going to be his own undoing with Sasuke.  D:

Speaking of Sas-cakes...  He should stay shirt/cloak/whatever-less.  At all times.  Yum.

I want Tobi to do something beneficial in the upcoming chapters, like, save his dear sempai from impending doom.

Here's to hoping Deidara doesn't get himself blown up/killed dead.

Eraya ^_~

Date: 2007-06-23 12:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] stakeh.livejournal.com
I dunno man, but I totally dig the stitched-up arm thing. And yes, Sasuke should stay half-naked forever. 8D

The flashback was pretty awesome, too. Makes me think that Deidara must be younger than I first thought. :O

Date: 2007-06-23 12:12 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] essyllus.livejournal.com
Oh yes. I loved the panel where Sasori, Kisame, and Itachi were all, "Is he done yet?" xD

And I love how in this one, Tobi calls Deidara-sempai stupid. Precious. <3

Date: 2007-06-23 12:17 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] starses.livejournal.com
I liked it too. But I'm afraid of what the next few chapters will bring now.
Looks like he had both of his eyes back then!

I really hope...that he won't die...

Is it just me, or does Tobi seem like he secretly hates Dei or something. It reminds me of Gintama how he (Okita) always thinks he's killed Hijikata only to have Hijikata retort that he's still alive. /mindless rambling.

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Date: 2007-06-23 06:00 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] clytemnaestra.livejournal.com
hehee, just had a mental picture of Tobi with a Bazooka.... ^_^

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Date: 2007-06-23 01:09 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] imarobotica.livejournal.com
Deidara shouldn't die, not yet. Because I'm starting to like him a little more...how ironic...

And TOBI!!! plz do somethin' dude! Don't just stand there watching your sempai lover die...terrible, terrible...

Speaking of Sasuke-teme. he does look good better without that damn shirt or whatever Orochimaru gave him...shirtless Sasuke is ♥

Date: 2007-06-23 02:21 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kemu33.livejournal.com
Wow. I don't think I've liked a chapter so much since...Geeze, Sasuke was reintroduced. I actually think this one's better, because I don't have contempt for Deidara (plus he has more facial expressions, which = totally better). Things I noted:

---Deidara saying "Behold! Isn't it impressive?" was totally hilarious to me. What a show-offy little boy. The picture was awesome too. If I were an icon maker,I would have a caption saying, like, "I'll name him fluffy!" Or Jackson. Or something.
--Speaking of little boys, I won't be surprised if he was, say, 13 or 14 in the flashback and only about 17 now. I always thought he was the same age or younger than Itachi, this just pretty much prooves it.
--I think it's safe to say that Deidara has two perfectly healtly eyes. There's three panels where you can tell he doesn't have his whatchamacallit on, and in one both eyes are open (page 4). Oh well. I guess and artist with depth perception is a good thing.
--Whoo! Let's lose some more clothes, boys! You next, Tobi!
--I really, really, really hope Deidara doesn't die. He's been my favorite Akatsuki member since he was introduced, and only Shikamaru beats him (because of seniority...).
--I didn't think it was possible for anyone to have more hair than Neji, but Deidara managages nicely.
--Finally...where did the hole in the wall behind Itachi come from? I find Deidara's stubborn crush on Itachi ('s looks...) amusing.

Can't wait to see this animated! Deidara has an eating disorder. He needs to join a "Avoid using eating as a means of self-destruction' club. Ha ha.

Date: 2007-06-23 02:27 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kemu33.livejournal.com
--To clarify, I know where the hole behind Itachi came from, just...why did the sunlight suddently appear behind Itachi? Heavenly interference? Or moving clouds in Cloud country? Eh, whatever.

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Date: 2007-06-23 06:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rasenth.livejournal.com
"--Finally...where did the hole in the wall behind Itachi come from? I find Deidara's stubborn crush on Itachi ('s looks...) amusing."

Deidara threw his spider thing at Itachi. Itachi dodged and the spider blew open the wall. Just to mention. XD

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Date: 2007-06-23 02:47 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aubreywitch.livejournal.com
SHIRTLESS SASUKEEEEE!!! *easily distracted* ^_^

Date: 2007-06-23 05:35 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] easterofflesh.livejournal.com
I'm even more scared for Deidara than I was before. I mean, they're giving us some of his BACKSTORY! That NEVER bodes well for ANY villian. *FEAR*

Date: 2007-06-23 07:00 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rasenth.livejournal.com
... you got a point!
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO.
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Date: 2007-06-23 06:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ylmik-wisty.livejournal.com
I liked Deidara's backstory sooo much. For the first time I thought he was cute. XD He was so young and silly, naive as someone said.

Date: 2007-06-23 07:13 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ex-duelist.livejournal.com
Deidara's backstory made me very happy. It was very interesting, and the sudden burst of character development also gives me hope that maybe Kishimoto will kill him off. :D

Date: 2007-06-23 07:43 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fjazz13.livejournal.com
I thinking that we'll definitely see Tobi action or maybe even save his sempai's ass from being blown up, I really hope so. He's gotta be good for something, other than digging holes apparently.

Or maybe this character development indeed means that Deidara is already a goner. Too much pride and too loud-mouthed.

Date: 2007-06-23 08:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sitiomania.livejournal.com
You know what would be awesome? If Deidara's dying super awesome attack left Sasuke blind. I'm fairly sure Deidara is gonna die, I don't want him to but the odds are against me. Think about it. With Sasuke blinded, he'll have to retreat. We can see more hysterical Team Muthafuckin' Snake action, the other teams in Konoha may be given some recognition, it'll give time for more Akatsuki members. Hell, by the time Sasuke learns to fight blind Itachi may have already gone blind himself! We can have a storyline including all the awesome characters Kishimoto made instead of "This entire manga is gonna be soley about Sasuke from now on kthnxsbai." Besides, we all know Sasuke isn't going to die, but it would be nice to see that he isn't completely OMG HAXX GOD MODE and untouchable and stuff. /speculation

This chapter was hilarious, and I'm really excited about this Garuda bomb he's making. Garuda is a Buddhist and Hindu god that is humanoid but resembles an eagle. He eats snakes, and when he was born from his egg he had the form of a massive inferno. The temple that they're in in the flashback seems Buddhist. Go look up Garuda because he's awesome anyway, but there are lots of hints that Deidara may have worshipped or idolized him. I can't wait for the next chapter! 8D

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Date: 2007-06-23 09:27 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] loika.livejournal.com
Just when I started to like him, too. Now he's going to die. Damnit. :/

Date: 2007-06-23 11:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] delusionism.livejournal.com
If Deidaras gonna die I'd rather he blow himself up than get killed by Sasuke of all people ):

and I agree with [livejournal.com profile] sitiomania, if DeiDeis gotta go then he must screw over Sasuke before he does, blinding him would be awesome~ <33333

And if Tobi just stands there and does nothing I will haet him ;___;

Date: 2007-06-24 01:36 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] drakkhen.livejournal.com
Agreed on Tobi. I think he's adorable, but if he spends the entire battle just standing there letting Dei get killed, his likability is going to plummet. >:(

NICE chapter

Date: 2007-06-23 01:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nazonatte69.livejournal.com
Just like Sasori, there was a back story, special attack, and then death. It's funny though, cause Hidan and Kakuzu did NOT have a backstory and they kinda died off in battle, where as Deidara and Sasori, one whom is apart of the Sand village (which is shed some light in the series) and the other that has been a nice main Akatsuki villian since the time skip has begun. Truly well thought out about by Kishimoto-san though:

1) Leader
2) Hidan
3) Kakuzu
4) Itachi
5) Kisame
6) Sasori
7) Deidara
8) Zetsu
9) Tobi
10) Orochimaru

WAIT A MINUTE! Isn't that all 9 members of Akatsuki? Are we missing one other than Tobi?

Date: 2007-06-23 02:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] khukuri.livejournal.com
10 members- you're missing the blue-haired mystery chap (chapette?).

Re: NICE chapter

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Date: 2007-06-23 04:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] seka.livejournal.com
I'm pretty sure Itachi was in Akatsuki prior to the clan incident! I can't remember exactly what part it's shown in (might be the mega-flashback during the Valley of the End), but I think there's something in there that shows it. *memory is failing me*

Date: 2007-06-23 09:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] spiderhood.livejournal.com
Tobi is a good boy, he'll kill Sasuke for the sake of us all.

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